(Adapted from The Elements of Style by Strunk & White.
See an excellent on-line version at
http://www.bartleby.com/141/index.html
)
1.
The
possessive singular of nouns is formed by adding “'s”.
Follow
this rule whatever the final consonant.
James’s car
The Jones’s house
A witch’s curse
2.
In
a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after
each term except the last.
Vincent ate a burger,
some fries, and a milkshake for lunch.
Football,
baseball, and basketball are all very popular in the United States.
The abbreviation etc.,
even if only a single term comes before it, is always followed by a comma except if it comes at the end of the sentence.
Rod bought the hot dogs, etc., for the picnic.
3. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas.
A parenthetic expression is a word or clause that qualifies or explains or digresses a bit from the subject.
“Elvis Presley, of course, is dead now.”
“Mick,
not Mack, is
the Australian.”
“Gordie
swears,
unless he is
desperate, never to
shop at Wal-Mart.”
Note:
Any expression that begins with
not
should be set off by commas. "It was Earl, not
I,
who set off the fire alarm."
Sometimes is it hard to decide if a word such as however or a brief phrase is really parenthetic. If the addition of the word or phrase interrupts the sentence just slightly, you may omit the commas. The most important thing to remember is IF YOU ADD ONE COMMA TO SET OFF THE PARENTHETIC PHRASE OR WORD, YOU MUST ADD THE OTHER.
Other parenthetic examples:
Dates:
(Note that the last
date has no commas. This is the European way to write dates and is much clearer
and easier than messing with all the commas.)
|
March
31, 1966 |
May
to December, 1999 |
Friday, June 13, 1990 |
10
May 1960 |
A name or title is set off by commas when the person is being
directly addressed.
“Goodness,
Patrick,
you gave me a fright!”
"Gosh, Patrick, you frightened me!" (informal or common usage)
“Excuse
me, Sir Nigel,
I believe that you are standing on my cat.”
“Hi,
Ted,
how’s it going?”
Abbreviations and titles that follow a name (etc., i.e., e.g., the abbreviations for academic
degrees, and titles that follow names are all set off by commas.)
Nouns, verbs, punctuation, etc., are tiresome to learn sometimes.
Murielle ate breakfast, e.g., eggs and toast, before she left for work.
Dr. Payne, D.D.S., just opened a new office.
Winston Churchill, Prime Minister of England, was a great leader.
4. Place a comma before a conjunction that introduces an independent clause.
An
independent clause is a clause that can stand alone as a separate sentence.
It has its own subject and verb.
The sky was blue, and the clouds were fluffy and white. (The sky was blue. The clouds were fluffy and white.)
Sheldon loved Zelda, but Zelda married Scott. (Sheldon loved Zelda. Zelda married Scott.)
5. Do not join independent clauses by a comma. (called a comma splice)
Never, never join two independent clauses with only a comma!
If you do not want to use a conjunction to join them, use a
semicolon
(;).
Correct: Angela has an infectious laugh; she giggles all the time.
Correct: Angela has an infectious laugh, and she giggles all the time.
Correct: Angela has an infectious laugh. She giggles all the time.
“Good happens,
bad happens.”
6. Do not break sentences in two. (Don’t use periods for commas either)
Correct: Jack met the girl of his dreams one night at a party.
Incorrect: Jack
met the girl of his dreams. One
night at a party.
Correct: Clarise saw her neighbor Tuesday at the store.
Incorrect: Clarise saw her neighbor. Tuesday at the store.
A colon (:) signals that what follows is
closely related to the preceding clause. A
colon is more effective than a comma, has less power to show separation than a
semicolon, and is more formal than a dash (--). Colons should never come between a verb and its complement or
a preposition from its object. *An
appositive follows a noun or a pronoun and explains or identifies it.
Robert
Frost wrote a much-loved poem: A Road Less
Taken. (appositive)
A
truly dedicated cook needs three things: proper knives,
a sense of adventure, and a stove.
(list)
After
getting his face slapped by his date, Paul remembered a quote by Ogden Nash:
“Candy is
dandy, but liquor is quicker.” (quote)
Colons are also used
as follows:
Dear
Sir:
(following
the salutation of a business letter)
The
train leaves at 10:30
am. (separating minutes and seconds
and hours in writing the time)
Amos
2:15 (separating
chapter from verse in a literary work)
Biology
101: Learning about the Birds and
the Bees
(subtitles
of books, plays, academic courses)
8. Use a dash to set off an abrupt break or interruption and to announce a long appositive or summary.
A dash is stronger than a comma, but is used mainly in casual and
informal writing. Use a dash only
when no other type of punctuation does seems appropriate.
Ken
thinks a lot about women—tall, short, fair, dark, old, young—when
he isn’t around them.
Television
comedy—if it can be
called comedy—is often not worth watching.
9. The subject and the verb must agree in number.
It doesn’t matter how many words are between the subject and the verb, or if those words are plural or singular—the subject and the verb are the two that must agree in number!
Mike, along with his sisters, his brothers, and all his children,
is
going to the park.
(singular
subject, singular verb)
Most
people--no matter what
nationality--are basically good I believe. (plural
subject, plural verb)
Bacon and eggs is a filling breakfast.
After the robbery, the hue and cry for stronger laws was heard across the state.
"Sex, drugs, and rock ‘n roll" was a slogan for the hippies in the 1960’s.
The barracks is over there.
Politics is a dirty business too often.
10. Use the proper case of pronoun
Remember, the personal pronouns I, she, he, they, we, as well as the pronoun who, are used as subjects of a sentence. They may also act as subjects in clauses, depending on the function of the pronoun. These are pronouns in the nominative case. (NOTE: The other personal pronouns, you and it have the same form in nominative or objective case)
| We say it this way | because--- |
| The guilty party was she. | she is a predicate nominative, i.e., the same as the subject. Turn the sentence around: "She was the guilty party." "Her was the guilty party is not correct! |
|
Will
Babs or he
be the top student? |
he is part of a compound subject, so the nominative case is used. |
|
Wendy
is the one who
we like to tease. |
who is a predicate nominative, i.e., the same as the subject. Try saying "Who we like to tease is Wendy." It still sounds right. "Whom we like to tease is Wendy." is wrong. |
|
Jean
talks more than I.
|
I
is the subject
of a comparison
(preceded by “than”), with the understood, but unwritten verb of
“do”. “Jean talks more
than I do” |
The personal pronouns me, her, him, them, us, as well as the pronoun whom, are used as objects of verbs and prepositions and are pronouns in the objective case. Remember that the object of an action verb answers the question what or who. (NOTE: The other personal pronouns, you and it have the same form in nominative or objective case)
| We say it this way | because--- |
| Wendy is the one to whom we direct our teasing | whom is the object of the verb direct, so we use the objective case. “We direct our teasing to what or whom? To Wendy.” |
| Matthew handed the mic to her. | Who did Matthew hand the mic to? To her. (To she just sounds silly.) |
| Gus offered some pizza to Murielle and us. |
Who
was offered pizza? Us. (you wouldn’t say
offered pizza to Murielle and
we!) |
11.
A
participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence must refer to the grammatical
subject.
A
participle is a
word formed from a verb and used as an adjective. They may show action when used in other sentences, but are NOT the verb
when used to modify a noun or pronoun. EXAMPLES:
The babbling
brook flowed gently toward the sea.
Andy, excited, cheered for his team. (excited is a verb, but is used here to describe Andy, so it is used as an adjective. Cheered is the verb in this sentence.)
Yelling
loudly, Linda scared away the mountain
lion.
Carlos, known also as Carl, studies
English diligently.
Looking everywhere, Lance finally found his mouse.
When
using a participial phrase, it is easy to confuse your reader or listener.
The phrase must clearly show to whom or to what it is referring.
|
We can't say it this way; |
we say it this way because. . . |
| Being a total wreck, I bought the car cheaply. | Being a total wreck, the car sold cheaply. (I am not the total wreck, the car is!) |
| Sitting on the table, Hetty saw a mouse. | Hetty saw a mouse sitting on table. (Who was on the table? Hetty or the mouse?) |
| Bored and tired, the hours passed slowly for Linden. | Bored and tired, Linden felt that the hours passed slowly. (The hours weren’t bored, Linden was.) |