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Redundant words and phrases are underlined. Other unnecessary words are in italics.
1. If you reread your work, you can find on rereading a great deal of redundant repetition can be stamped out and removed by rereading and editing.If you reread your work, you can find on rereading a great deal of redundant repetition can be stamped out and removed by rereading and editing.
2. Do not be redundant; do not use more words than necessary, because it's highly superfluous.
Do not be redundant; do not use more words than necessary, because it's highly superfluous.
3. It has come to our considered attention that in a large majority of cases, far too many people use a great deal more words than is absolutely necessary when engaged in the practice of writing sentences.
It has come to our considered attention (We noticed) that in a large majority of cases, far too many people use a great deal more words than is absolutely necessary when engaged in the practice of writing sentences.
4. They had a complete monopoly on the scamdiddle industry until we merged together and developed some new innovations. (Note: Scamdiddle is a nonsense word.)
They had a complete monopoly on the scamdiddle industry until we merged together and developed some new innovations. (Note: Scamdiddle is a nonsense word.)
5. Margie is absolutely indispensable to the internal, inner workings of the committee of people. My personal opinion is to keep and retain her in her current, present job and position.
Margie is absolutely indispensable to the internal, inner workings of the committee of people. My personal opinion is to keep and retain her in her current, present job and position.